Yet Another PMD Comic

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March 18th, 2019, 4:06 am
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I'm here for the comics. March 18th, 2019, 4:15 am
I guess I'll start off with the grammatical stuff: "have" not "had" in the first bubble of the last panel, and I'm not quite sure how to fix the last sentence in the last panel, but it needs a little love. Sorry to be doing this again. On the other hand, the expressions are on-point and I'm very much enjoying the comic.
WriterRaven March 18th, 2019, 4:42 am
@I'm here for the comics.: I mean you could just not correct the grammar.
AssaultBird2454 March 18th, 2019, 7:09 am
I agree, Just the way most grammar comments are worded seem rude... but if the author / artist does not mind then that’s fine...
AssaultBird2454 March 18th, 2019, 7:10 am
But I do agree, expressions are on point :)
DreamersNeverDie March 18th, 2019, 8:15 am
Very true.
Flavia-Elric March 18th, 2019, 9:22 am
@WriterRaven: Don't worry, I actually find it very useful!
shadowlucario50 March 18th, 2019, 9:03 am
@I'm here for the comics.: A suggestion to enhance the final sentence is to remove "not" and place a comma after "beginning". Replacing "didn't" with "haven't" would also make the sentence run smoother. In the end, it could look like the following:

"Since the beginning, you two haven't spark even a bit of reliability."

Now to be disgraced due to posting grammatical corrections myself!~
Flavia-Elric March 18th, 2019, 9:20 am
@shadowlucario50: I indeed had trouble writing the last two speech bubbles. I was already waiting for that type of feedback, I appreciate it!
Fixed!
WriterRaven March 18th, 2019, 9:24 am
@Flavia-Elric: Alright that's good then! I wasn't sure and I know several authors aren't fans of getting grammar critiques without asking for it. ^^b
pixlyJolt March 18th, 2019, 10:34 am
...it's ironic how this guys name is, ‘I came here for the COMIC’
Flavia-Elric March 18th, 2019, 9:22 am
@I'm here for the comics.: I appreciate the feedback. Fixed!
Ally Harper (Guest) March 18th, 2019, 11:44 am
@Flavia-Elric: Oh, that's cool that you have your personal grammer/spelling editor. I wish I had one'w'. I'm new to the site so is there a way the person editing the grammar can private message you on most of the pages so they wouldn't fill up the comments with grammar stuff? Thanks
Flavia-Elric March 18th, 2019, 12:43 pm
@Ally Harper: Oh, I don't have a personal one, I just appreciate any comment that help me fix anything off in the speeches! xD
But yes, there's a way to send private messages. Try checking the tab with your profile, below there's the message option.

EDIT: Oh, wait, are you actually advising me to use PM instead of getting comments? >w>'
I'm here for the comics. March 18th, 2019, 4:16 am
Er, second bubble of the last panel. My bad.
Someone7654 March 18th, 2019, 6:20 am
And then eevee appears like “hey guys what are we doing, also I have a name now and a friend”
Bob (Guest) March 18th, 2019, 7:42 am
Most people don't talk grammatically correct.
DreamersNeverDie March 18th, 2019, 8:15 am
Unreliable...ouch...
SansOfDale March 18th, 2019, 8:20 am
I mean, I try to speak correctly but I usually fail in grammar usage. The fact that the rescuers failed in their task and DIDNT get immediately warped out of the dungeon is kind of confusing, isn’t that what usually would happen?
Flavia-Elric March 18th, 2019, 9:31 am
@SansOfDale: I like to think it's an optional thing. They choose to leave for failing and start all over again. Also, what they're doing now isn't exactly the original mission xD
Julian or Yoshidakid March 18th, 2019, 9:46 am
Celebi got roasts
Blaze01 March 18th, 2019, 10:56 am
@Bob: The English language is about 90% padding; you can get your point across fairly easily without being "grammatically correct".
Umbreon5456 March 18th, 2019, 11:35 am
Hmm celebi certainly has a good point.
DarkFlameOSecrets March 18th, 2019, 11:38 am
Oof
comercole March 18th, 2019, 12:31 pm
woah celibi that was harsh.
ProfessorPhanyom March 18th, 2019, 12:52 pm
Darn, someone already completed my (almost) daily grammar check.
I'm here for the comics. March 18th, 2019, 2:16 pm
Yep, sorry.
I'm here for the comics. March 18th, 2019, 2:20 pm
That was a lot more discussion than I was really expecting. Anyway, I do want to stress that I didn't mean to sound condescending. I just correct everybody's grammar and that in and of itself is seen as condescending. I can absolutely just send PMs if it's a problem; I am just trying to help.
Also, I know about the irony of my name in this instance, but to be fair comics do in fact include the words contained in them.
I'm here for the comics. March 18th, 2019, 2:21 pm
The mobile interface for SmackJeeves is fantastic. That was supposed to be a reply on the earlier conversation.
Someone7654 March 18th, 2019, 2:51 pm
Lol
Someone7654 March 18th, 2019, 2:53 pm
I have decided to make this my profile picture forever
GearTech147 March 20th, 2019, 8:28 pm
@Someone7654: I kind of want to do the same because of you now.

But in all my things.
I'm here for the comics. March 18th, 2019, 5:05 pm
@Someone7654 It's such a good image.
Ikualokatl March 18th, 2019, 7:31 pm
Celebi does have a point. These guys aren't that good in their work
Julian or Yoshidakid March 18th, 2019, 9:43 pm
They need some ice for that burn
dantelupine March 19th, 2019, 1:46 pm
Grammar Error Tis I, once again! In Celebi's final bubble, it should likely say "you two haven't sparked"!